How to Evolve

How to Evolve

There Will Be Fireworks

Scraps from a notebook

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Ros Barber
Nov 05, 2024
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Free Fireworks in the Park

Behind us, Cantonese spoons itself
like soup between a family.  
A whirr of French, then the home language, 
a cushion of song, soft as candlelight 
from bright rooms
whose open-curtained dinners
start up warmly one by one
like bonfires on a coastline.

The lamplight paints us gold, like we’re its gods.

A nine-year-old girl 
in brushed-cotton nightie
stands on a council wheelie
to see from her front path 
her dad (earring, rollup)
having a beer with a friend.

The sky is a well we are emerging from.

Good-naturedly siphoned through the gates
our twos and threes disperse like particles.
Then density increases by degress.
A mum only barely taller than her red-sweatshirted son:
“It’s not just fireworks, trust me."

The night’s as dark as it’s going to get.
A brown-smudged blue, a muddy toddler’s coat
and we, beneath it, watching the crane contraption,
stomp our feet, and wait. 
In the UK today it’s Bonfire Night.

Boom!

In the…

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